Love this series already! Just keep doing whatcha doing. LKF!!!

oooohhh my dear! there is a wolf in the scene with your boyfriend! WoW! ..and he looks fantastic! PS: not your boyfriend but the wolf.. lol!

i just love looking at this series

BUT YOU DIDN'T. NOW SHUT UP AND STOP TALKING TO YOURSELF.

I DIDN'T MEAN TO! I WANTED TO DELETE THAT PART!

BUT NOTHING, STUPID.

I suppose that is true. But

It wouldn't really be my series if I used your plot.... <:(

AWwwww. Yeah, it's fine.

Sadly no, @Bella, I have a plot....

I might encorporate 1 part, (sort of, not-really-ish), if you don't mind....

...It's not?

epic story

OHMYGODBELLATHATWASLONGANDE
PICANDDETAILEDANDAWESOME but that's not what's gonna happen.

oh n o

The card in her pocket and I will finish this later.

what she was doing crying in an alley, and Aly told her that her boyfriend was taken away by the police and he had all their money so she couldn't really do anything, since they had no homes and Aly couldn't eat. Danielle nodded and gave Aly her business card which had her phone number on it, and said if she ever needed anything else, give her a call. The limo came to a stop and Aly got out, the limo raced away. Aly studied the card and noticed that the lettering was the same as her eye, it would slowly change colors from green. She thought that she must have been losing her sight so she put--

limosine and told her name was Danielle. Her father was a wealthy buisnessman and when he passed all his riches and mansion was given to her. Danielle told Aly she would take her anywhere she wanted and Aly told her she wanted to go to the police station, and then they went off. While they were driving, Aly noticed something strange about Danielle. Under her sunglasses she noticed one eye was horribly scarred and the other looked like it was green, but it was slowly changing colors from green, to yellow, to purple, to blue and back to green. After a few minutes of scilence Danielle asked Aly--

finally broke down and screamed at an old woman and someone called the cops. The cops came and took Torren, people were saying he beat the woman and tried to take her money. Aly tried to tell the cop that he only had a little spat at her but there was too much noise and he didn't hear her weak yelling. Torren was taken away to the station and Aly cried again. She tried to gather her strength but she didn't think she could ever do anything without him. Then a young, brunette woman came across Aly in the street, and offered to help her out. Aly quickly accepted and the woman took Aly to a --

with a shaking finger and like the girl did, he warned them never to go back in the forest. He said that there are some things that were never meant to be seen. Torren ignored Bill and draged Aly away from him. He said he was insane, but Aly knew otherwise. They went to a bus stop and boarded a bus to the big city. An hour or so went by and they finally reached the city, but then they realised that they barely had any money left. They tried to find ways to get money, but nothing legal would work. They tried begging but everyone ingored them or scolded them to go back to their homes. Torren--

girl ran away at an unhuman speed. Aly was bawling at this point to she and Torren left the forest to a small town. They bought food and medical stuff with the very little money they had left. There was an old man outside of a general store who noticed them. "Oy, over here." He grunted with a grizzly voice. He asked them who they were since had never seen him before. Aly and Torren explained most of their story, and Aly slipped out the bit with Torren's sister. The old man named Bill seemed surprised, but not overly shocked. He knit his eyebrows and stared right at Aly and Torren. He pointed--

a hero, he draged the wolf whom he thought was dead to Aly. The sun was rising and they witnessed his sister transform back into a little girl. They were both horrified and scared, and the girl woke up. She saw the two and started to cry because she was also scared and because she hurt Torren badly. She started to get up and run but Aly grabbed her wrist and asked her how she became that way. But the girl growled at Aly and yanked away, and in a deep, ghoulish voice warned them to stay away from this forest. Torren noticed that her eyes were a silvery-red but before he could do anything the--

Okay. So since Aly ran she didn't see what was happening, but the wolfie/doggie-thingie Torren was attacked by was actually his little sister(DUNDUNDUNNNN) whom was attacked by a savage wolf on a full moon on Friday the 13th, so when she got bitten she would turn into a blood-thirsty werewolf at midnight. She escaped from the cave before the others and ran away because she was transforming and didn't want them to see. But when she saw Torren and Aly walking her wolf-form took over and charged at them. She tried to eat Torren but failed because Torren knocked her out with a rock. Feeling like--

Sure Bella.

Yay! So they didn't die!

You're right, I don't know what's going to happen, but can I guess?

You don't know what they're going or what's gonna happen.

I think that tomato soup thing and not worrying about his sister just made the series bad. But I'll still read it.

i stole yer little sister

...

I hope thats tomato soup dripping from the dogs mouth

Tomato soup!

@piggy123 : they some how got anothere chance in life

Its funny how he doesn't care where his sister is

...Amazing start...

So happy for the Sequeal

How can they be alive? And no scrapes or anything? MAGIC? Yuss....

LOL tomato soup

YAAY FIRST EPISODE.

Oh, and for those people who get annoyed when I make the rocks fall and stuffs, sorry, but this just wouldn't make sense if I didn't do that.

Aw shi